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Jesus You

You gave hope to the weary
Sight to the blind
Peace to the soul of man kind
You bring light to the darkness
Calm to the chaos
You fight the good fight
You heal my brokenness and give me might
Patience in midst of the storm inside
Your love I will no longer deny...
©2007-2009 ~InThePottersHands
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Words keep floating in my head and this is what comes of them. I hope they mean as much to you as they mean to mean because it comes from my hearts core.

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:icondrusilla14:
Beautiful piece written:heart::star:

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Passion
Angelus-(narrates)
It hurts sometimes more than we can bear.
If we could live without passion, maybe we’d know some kind of peace. But we would be hollow.
Empty rooms, shuttered and dank...
Without passion, we’d be truly dead.
:icondhn-al3ood:
great words :+fav:

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je pense que je peux voler
Je pense que je peux toucher le ciel
...
:rose:Je suis qui je suis:rose:
:iconinthepottershands:
Thanks the words really flow from my heart.
:icondrusilla14:
Your welcome

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Passion
Angelus-(narrates)
It hurts sometimes more than we can bear.
If we could live without passion, maybe we’d know some kind of peace. But we would be hollow.
Empty rooms, shuttered and dank...
Without passion, we’d be truly dead.
:icondistantwings:
really nice rhythm and message
maybe remove the periods?
they kind of break up the flow
:iconinthepottershands:
Thanks for the comment. I really try hard with rhythm. I liked your idea about the periods at first I was like it has to have punctuation. Then after looking at it. I think you were right about the periods breaking up the flow. Flows much better now. Thanks for the support and help. :o)
:iconinthepottershands:
I keep getting the wrong face. Meant this one.

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